Merge pull request #558 from janhq/jan-539-restructure-docs

Small description changes

docs/docs/about/about.md

@@ -2,17 +2,17 @@
 title: About Jan
 ---
 
-Jan is a tool to build your own Personal AI, that runs privately on your own computer. 
+Jan is a tool to run LLMs privately on your personal computer. 
 
-We envision a future where our lives are improved by helpful and practical AI assistants, that we continuously customize to meet our needs. 
+Jan's roadmap is to build a framework for Personal AIs that can be customized and extended by anyone. 
 
 ## Why does Jan Exist?
 
-### Our Mission
+### Mission
 
 To enable high-productivity individuals to use AI to scale themselves. 
 
-### Our Ideal Customer
+### Ideal Customer
 
 Our ideal customer is an AI Enthusiast who wants to experiment with solving problems using AI, and is ok with experimental software. 
 
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Our ideal customer is an AI Enthusiast who wants to experiment with solving prob
 
 Our goal in 2023 is to find 500 of these ideal customers. 
 
-### Problem Statement
+### Problem
 
 Our ideal customer has clear ideas for how to solve his/her problems using AI, but has not done so because:
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Our ideal customer has clear ideas for how to solve his/her problems using AI, b
 - Doesn't have 10 hours/week to build and maintain a Personal AI
 - Uncomfortable with giving personal info to ChatGPT
 
-### Our Solution
+### Solution
 
 Jan is a Personal AI that you can customize, and runs privately on your own computer.
 

docs/src/pages/index.js

@@ -79,11 +79,10 @@ export default function Home() {
                     Personal AI
                   </h1>
                   <p className="text-xl leading-relaxed lg:text-2xl lg:leading-relaxed text-gray-500 dark:text-gray-400">
-                    Build your own&nbsp;
+                    Run &nbsp;
                     <span className="dark:text-white text-black">
-                      Personal AI,
+                      Large Language Models
                     </span>
-                    &nbsp;that runs&nbsp;
                     <br />
                     <span className="dark:text-white text-black">
                       privately